Date: February 27, 2014 10:21 am Title: Chapter 14 - Wild Things
Unghh, playfull fighting? in the water? FREAKING NAKED???? Please just kill me *-*
Gosh, how I love these chapters where nothing really important happens, and is just adorable fluff!
Like, don't try that the whole story, every chapter, that'd be boring as fuck, and Imma tell you once again; You are perfect in balancing your chapters! The story is never boring and overly fluffy, just per-fect! *-*
And as reply on the last review, you are perfect to me too, sweetcheeks ;) ♥
Oh, I'm so glad that you think I'm doing a good job balancing out this story. 'Cause that's been a big challenge for me to figure out - how much to focus on romance vs. humor vs. adventure vs. songs, and how to balance out TLOS with Glee with CrissColfer. There are so many things going on, which makes it fun to write, but also leaves me a little worried that some readers might be wishing I'd focus more on one or less on another. But so long as the IMPORTANT readers like the balance, then I'm happy. :D
Oh, and I have to let you in on a little secret. After I finish this story, and before I start working on the sequel, I think I'm going to try writing an As a White Knight reprise - a retelling of that whole story in the first person, from Darren's perspective. But you're only the second person I've told, and I'm not sure when and if it will really happen, so keep it under wraps for now... ;)
Date: February 27, 2014 03:28 am Title: Chapter 14 - Wild Things
Gah! Naked water fights?! Concealed crisscolfer feelings and wishing on shooting stars?! BRIE AND GRAPES FROM TRENT?! I frikkin love this chapter! And I don't need steamy...I just know how well you write it! But this fic is easily one of my faves, and PG-13 is perfectly fine with me as long as it keeps coming in regular installments :D Plus, anyone who can use the word verisimilitude in a friggin review response can, as far as I'm concerned, do anything they want! :D
In response to your response-I thought I remembered the Brett/Tradesman thing, but couldn't remember exactly-he's PERFECT for it!
And I think my colleagues are already scared of me. I had a client asking to fly to Kelowna the other day, and, I shit you not, she actually said "That's in Canada". I repeated it, almost in song, and burst out laughing. She looked very confused. I also love my job ;)
And... ERRRMIIIGGGAAAAD. You're doing a reprise?! I won't tell a soul. I swear. Honest. Just know that I'm now going to read the entire AAWK fic again to prepare myself. I'm way too excited about this...!
Too bad Kelowna doesn't rhyme with guinea pig, or you could have done the whole song. ;D (I love having inside jokes with people I've never met.)
Oh, oh, oh! Do you know what would be totally awesome? If, as you're rereading As a White Knight on His Steed, you write me a review for every chapter! In fact, if you do, I'll buy you this guinea pig http://www.zastavki.com/eng/Animals/Rodents/wallpaper-34093.htm and have it flown first class to New Zealand.
Can you tell I love your reviews? :D