Date: March 11, 2014 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Wild Ride
YOU! You are trying to kill me aren't you?!?
This chapter was like....god i don't even have words for it!!! they are naked and Darren tries to impress Chris with his tounge but fails and they just kinda agreed on going out and making out and if they don't have sex soon I'm gonna die x.x
and then the cart and I couldn't even focus on the Big Bad Wolfs and the Dead End because they are nacked and sitting so close and the cart is rocking them against each other and I'm just dying over here xD
I bow down for you this time and thanks for the nakedness which was hopefully not the last xD
also the dwarfs were so amazing! all grumpy first and than all nice when chris and darren were naked and my sister sat next to me when there was this I'LL SOW YOU MINE and then she looked at me with a strange look and just raised her eyebrow and I had to convice her that I'm not reading smut while sitting next to her and then she stayed next to me reading it with me and it got all naked and now she probably thinks I'm even more weird...but who cares xD
as usual I can't wait to read more :')
Okay, first of all, I hope your sister is old enough that I don't have to be filled with guilt for corrupting her. 'Cause even though nothing actually HAPPENED, this chapter was still pretty risque. ;)
Meanwhile, for some reason this site won't let me add UST to my categories (maybe I just have too many?) even though I feel like for the last several chapters the unresolved sexual tension has been one of the main focus points. So I hope it's not going to actually kill you, 'cause I don't think it's going to be resolved any time soon...
P.S. I don't recognize that cute little guy bowing down to me, but I like him. :D
Date: March 09, 2014 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Wild Ride
Yeah, right. Like Chris wasn't impressed with Darrens cherry stem skills. Nice poker face, Christopher .. :D
This chapter is awesome-I love that crazy cat lady Colfer made an appearance-I do so love crazy cat lady Colfer ;)
And the universe isn't toturing him. It's presenting opportunities. Plenty of them. He just needs to survive the wall of rubble and use them to his advantage! Damn you for the cliffhanger....! :D
I wondered if you could sense me winking at you when I wrote the cat-lady line. ;) 'Cause I was definitely thinking of NJAMM at that moment.
And yes, Chris does have a pretty good poker face, except that his blush always gives him away...
As for the universe and its insistence on presenting him with opportunities for ending up naked with Darren, I think Chris's reaction at this point is pretty much "Where are we going? And what am I doing in this handbasket?". ;D
Sorry about the cliffhanger. (Not really.) Now you know how I feel, waiting and waiting and waiting for your next update... ;D
Date: March 09, 2014 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Wild Ride
You're a little show off, aren't you? (Yes, I needed to write another comment just so I could reply!)
"I can actually tie a maraschino cherry stem in a knot with my tongue too" If you can do that, I bet you can do a lot more with that tongue ;D
While typing that I realized how wrong that sounded, but it's kinda the same as you saying you wanted to make me scream xD
I'm glad I 'helped' you writing that chapter (sort of) by making a joke, and later actually using it, I'm honored!
And you're such a tease!
Well, you already knew that I'm a tease. That's why you love me, right? ;D
And anyway, look who's talking. Taking my innocent comments about cherry stems and making you scream, and reading some sort of innuendo into them... You're making my virginal little cheeks blush. (And now you're probably going to twist that around into something dirty. Oh, you naughty, naughty girl.) ;D
Date: March 09, 2014 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Wild Ride
I saw the "au naturel" thing in the description, and I already screamed *-*
And then you said the dwarfs were naked and I was like 'shit' but THEN you made them take their clothes off...... Geeeeezz, messing with my emotions, much??
(Yes, I forgot what you said in the last comment on my review, about the dwarf-mines-nudist-colony, don't judge me D:)
Favorite line though "You wanna know what I can do with my tongue?" I got all dirty minded (duhh) which made me as sexually frustrated as Chris at the end..
I mean, You let Darren sit in between Chris' legs... NAKED???
I know they're gonna be safe (SPOILER ALERT!) so please tell me..
Is Darren gonna feel Chris', you know, hard one? ;)
You know, the I'll Show You Mine is really thanks to you. 'Cause it's true that a reviewer on another site did request more naked Darren, but I just threw the dwarf nudist colony idea out there as a joke. But something about writing that down in my response to you got the idea stuck in my head, and I thought "Oh, what the hell. This story is already completely ridiculous. Why not just go for it?" Plus, I just really wanted to make you scream. ;)
Glad you enjoyed Darren's "Do you want to know what I can do with my tongue?" line. Not to brag, or anything, but I can actually tie a maraschino cherry stem in a knot with my tongue, too. Just saying. ;)
And, oh, wouldn't you like to know the answer to that last question? (Well, obviously. That's why you asked. Duh.) But you'll just have to wait for the next chapter to find out... ;D